Looking For Feedback on the Rewrite

I am rewriting my novel. I’m quite a bit into it (again) but I would really like to test my material. I’m totally fine with opening my kimono, but I truly want some feedback. Even if people hate it.

I have posted it on WattPad. My hope is that the large communities of readers there will let me know what they think.

If you’re interested, give it a read, and leave a comment:

http://www.wattpad.com/story/29400699-burning-river-of-love-a-comedy

Send me a comment directly and when it’s through, I’ll send you the completed book in your favorite electronic format.